Here is the first paraphgraph of a story aimed at 7-10 year olds.
“Yeah?” Kim slid down the shiny brown banister.
“I told you not to do that!” Said her mother crossly. Kim shrugged and sat down on a cream, leather sofa. She picked up her mug and took sip. “Careful, it’s ho…” Began her mother but it was too late. “AAAAAAAAAAAH!”Kim Screamed. “BURNING TOUNGE!”
Weather Time has taken over Weather Watch, as the most populat weather program. But soon, Kim finds out how they get the weather right every time...
“Hold on” He whispered and suddenly Kim and Neptune had vanished along with aeroplane into thin air. And Peter was standing alone in an empty shed, wishing that Weather Time never existed.